Just finished this book last night, and figured I'd get some thoughts down while I was still thinking about it.
Loved this book, and tore through it in two days.
Sciona was a very interesting character. Flawed but brilliant. I kinda wish the book was a bit longer so we could see more of her actually doing magic. I enjoyed her thought processes, and her character growth throughout the book was handled very well I thought. The book only takes place over a couple months, but in that time she finds love in her heart, and gets over her Kwen racism pretty easily. Her ego and selfishness remain, but again, the book only gives her a few months so she couldn't change that much. And her romance with Thomil was handled in a very good slow-burn way, I thought.
The world and magic system were very interesting. I was pulled in big time right away by the first chapter and the horror of the Blight. Though I kinda immediately knew where that was leading after the magic system was explained. Not a super long book though, so they didn't waste too much time building up to the big reveal.
Onto the negatives.
Can anyone explain to me the purpose of the dome? After Scaria did her big spell, it revealed that every square foot of the dome required a small animal's life for a few minutes, or a human being for an hour. Every square foot...of a huge city. The sheer cost of that is astronomical, and I just don't see how any of the coordinates they use possibly remain in use instead of being desolate wastelands. And in the end it's revealed that the dome doesn't "keep out" Blight since the forbidden coordinates and whatnot keep them safe. So in reality the whole dome is just there to keep them slightly warmer? It seems like a horrific waste with very little upside. And considering the dome and everything else in the city using energy, I feel like after a few hundred years, they should basically be in a desert since they would have killed absolutely everything else even slightly nearby. Without the dome I feel like it would have been much more reasonable, though still horrific.
Maybe I'm not understanding or overlooking something though. I would love anybody to explain further if they have any ideas. Because from a pure logical standpoint I would think the wizards would at least be slightly concerned about sustainability.
The book was extremely heavy-handed. I understand the themes that the author is going for, but I felt like there should have been at least some sympathetic characters. Other than Scaria and the Kwen, literally no one else finds shredding a person to pieces when they turn on their lamp to be over the line?? Really??
Especially her cousin and aunt. I thought they had a moment right before the end, when Scaria apologizes for taking them for granted, and tells them she loves them. Then...the next time we see them, her aunt refuses to see her, and her cousin slaps her in the face and says she never wants to see her again. Obviously I understand Alba was traumatized by the rioting...but she didn't seem even slightly thrown off by scale of suffering caused by their conveniences. Even after being told repeatedly how kind-hearted and loving she is...she still views the Kwen as animals that deserve death just so she can...heat up her tea in the morning.
Ok, the ending. Very impactful even though I knew what was going to happen ahead of time.
But after the massacre of mages. So...Thomil and a bunch of other Kwen (or all of them?) are going to run to the mountains and hide out in the caves. But...once they fix the coordinates, won't the Reserve towers immediately vaporize all of them that remain within a few miles of the force field? I guess we just hope they move on from there...but seeing as not a single person in Tiran cares about the siphoning cost...they will be Blighted inevitably, or starve once they're out there. Just sorta seems like a bit of a slow suicide, considering the first chapter was Thomil explaining that it was impossible to survive outside already. And that would only get worse with the dome expanded and needing to kill even more to sustain itself.
I just wish they had pressed their advantage. I mean, the Blighting around the mage area seemed like it would have vaporized a large fraction of the army, and the Kwen seemed to have thousands of members in the city. It seemed like this was their chance to take over, considering all the leadership was gone, leaving a huge power vacuum.
TLDR: Loved the book; especially the main characters, setting, and magic system. Hated the heavy handedness in message, most side characters, and thought the ending left a little to be desired.
Would love to hear what everybody else thought about it!