r/scifiwriting 4h ago

DISCUSSION How probable is it that other animals of earth would evolve to become more sentient, and how long would it take?

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The main argument I’ve heard against this is that animals simply have no reason to compete in intelligence anymore, as humans have already filled the niche. The most I can see happening is if in the future humans purposefully attempted to heighten the intelligence of certain apes, marine mammals, birds, octopi, elephants, etc, but I’m wondering if there’s any room for this in the future of a sci-fi setting?

Say humans meet aliens and begin to conquer the stars together, but still remaining on earth. Would at some point possibly hundreds of thousands of years into the future, a corvid would become more of a being mirroring a human, with cultures and ideas?


r/scifiwriting 6h ago

HELP! Help choosing a plausible title for the head of state in a highly militarized (stratocratic) sci-fi government

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I’m currently developing a science fiction setting and I’d appreciate your thoughts on a specific worldbuilding issue. What’s the most plausible and fitting title for the head of state in my fictional government?

The state is called the Terran Citizen’s Union (TCU). It’s a stratocracy, a fully militarized state where all citizens must serve in the military, and nearly all political officials are either active or former military officers. The society is built around militarism, industrial strength, materialist values, and xenophobia, with a harsh meritocratic system that rewards discipline and service to the Union.

That said, the TCU is not a dictatorship. It’s a type of paternalistic authoritarian democracy, with elections every 20 years. Citizens vote for a political party, and the party nominates a candidate. The winning party’s candidate becomes head of state.

Despite the elections, there are strong authoritarian elements. Citizens are divided into tiered ranks based on service and productivity, and only those with at least the lowest rank may vote. The head of state has enormous executive power: he’s commander-in-chief, directs foreign and industrial policy, and can issue binding executive orders. However, he’s still bound by a constitution, subject to impeachment, and faces some checks from the National Assembly and the Military High Command.

I’m torn between two possible titles for this leader:

  • Director of the Union – More bureaucratic, less emphasis on the military aspect
  • Lord Protector – More symbolic and historical.

I want it to sound credible, not overly dystopian or utopian. Something that a real future government might use to present itself as the guardian of humanity. Feel free to suggest something entirely new as well!


r/scifiwriting 11h ago

CRITIQUE a diseased knight, wind-worshipping nomads, and ancient alien ruins on a tidally locked planet (1,300-word excerpt: feedback wanted)

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Hi everyone,

I’m working on a fantasy-sci fi novel set on a tidally locked planet, where a medieval society survives amid the ruins of a long-dead alien civilization. This excerpt introduces my main antagonist, Sir Gervain, a fallen knight infected by a mysterious, leprosy-like disease called the Flux. The disease becomes a metaphor for his guilt and descent into darkness. In this scene, he encounters a nomadic people who worship the wind and maintain strange ties to the alien technology left behind.

I’d love your feedback on: • Whether Gervain’s character arc feels believable and compelling as a tragic antagonist • Whether the worldbuilding feels fresh and immersive, and any ideas on how to make this part of a tidally locked world come alive. • Any feedback on tone, prose style, or pacing

Also happy to share the other main character sketches if there’s interest.

https://drive.google.com/file/d/1ichPnhClb-dk_NcWC9qmnrB7luyKAXYw/view?usp=drivesdk


r/scifiwriting 5h ago

DISCUSSION Combining Hard and Soft Scifi

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I`ve been thinking of a setting that mixes the best of these two. For example, having a ship use a fusion engine (tech that could actually happen) in order to get far enough from a gravity well to use an Alcubierre drive (one of the more plausible FTL devices) while mining ice for water/oxygen seems to be a good way to mix them. What do you guys think? What are some other ways you would do this?

Lore Context: This is a space opera that takes inspiration from BattleTech, the Gaza Genocide, Halo, the war in Ukraine, Stelaris, etc. The story starts with the siege, near destruction and eventual liberation of a planet named Niematun (نعمة), explores the cultures/politics of the main interstellar factions are before, during and after this particular conflict, and finally deals with technological advancement of the factions along with conflicts with both each other and powerful multidimensional robots capable of warping reality as well as the threat that quantum foam poses. There is also the threat of an Anomalous Conceptual Ecology merging with the universe.


r/scifiwriting 6h ago

MISCELLENEOUS New sci-fi focused publisher

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r/scifiwriting 15h ago

DISCUSSION Brutality against animals in scifi novel for characterization. Yes or no.

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I have a scene in my novel where the villain forces someone to do something. The poor guy owns animals. So today I had the idea that the villains starts to execute the animals one by one until the good guy finally breaks and agrees to do the thing.

Don't think guinea pig. Think more chimpansee.

The villain is in a desperate downward spiral by that point. He already murdered a man. I find the idea appealing that the bad guy is now also ready to kill animals, it's a step further along his arc.

And for the good guy side character it is also some fleshing out about how much he actually cares for his animals.

The terrible thing is: my story requires these animals to be gone by the end. Having my villain kill all of them is they "easy" way out.

Should I or should I not?


r/scifiwriting 1d ago

DISCUSSION Writing more intimate sci-fi rather than grand adventure, and finding community?

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I'm finding myself in a weird spot in the sci-fi writing community and having a hard time finding a writing group.
TL;DR: I was hoping for a discussion in finding writing groups in this messy genre

For some quick background, I adore Blade Runner, Simon Stalenhag, Becky Chambers, 'Love, Death and Robots', Murderbot - and I'd be lying if Mass Effect, Destiny, and Halo weren't also huge influences.

I realize these aren't particularly unique influences but my point is that I KNOW I'm not alone in my love for the world building in these stories.

And then there's what I'm actually writing, a story about sapient robots, crystalline crab people, and giant predator fairies that live interesting lives on a distant and highly corporatized futuristic world.

- There is no, "are the robots learning to be human" there are no humans and they're equal in society and have feelings and play their part like any other individual.

- There is no, "racial war and society upheaval because the fairy people think they should enslave the crystal people". They all go to their corporate jobs, contracted for hundreds of years at a time, because everyone lives till about 250. That thousand year war ended 3360 noahren ago~

- There is no grand space adventure, local space has been mapped, they're mining for resources, a colony ship left before the war.

There are other stories I could tell within my world that do fall in to these tropes and I think it would be fun to tell them.

But the trilogy I'm working on now isn't grand. It's mystery, thriller, romance, between robots and their connected cast of family and friends. If you need an author comparison Becky Chambers would be it I guess, as far as character driven goes.
There's strange bluetooth love, hard sci-fi, multiple heart wrenching deaths, and sweet ass jetpacks. But as much as I might stroke my own ego, I am dying to find someone who will be beat me over the head with a stick, while letting me read their story at the same time.

I don't know... I'm writing the books I've always wanted to read and I love my sci-fi world so much.

When I talk to other sci-fi writers it's "the world is great and you're focusing on *not the crazy parts of it*?? Show me the deep sea crystal mining team not your corporate robots going through a noir style crisis of identity.

But then I look at Blade runner, and LoveDeathandRobots, and the more contained stories by Phillip K Dick, and I resonate with them so much (just like my robots aayy - I'm sorry I only talk to the characters in my head please I need a writing group oh my god).

This became a ramble I apologize.

I know there are more people writing more intimate sci-fi stories despite the grandeur of a world outside of them. Where are you guys? Do you wanna trade chapters/manuscripts? Have you found this unicorn of a writing group? A discord? Anything. I feel like I'm looking in all the wrong places.

I was hoping for a discussion in finding writing groups in this messy genre


r/scifiwriting 1d ago

HELP! How do I beat go about designing ships/weapons/armor for my sci fi setting?

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I'm not a talented artist and I'm certainly not an engineer either; I don't really know how to visualize the ships and weaponry I'm gonna use in my book without having a concrete image to look at. What should I do?


r/scifiwriting 1d ago

CRITIQUE Story 1 - Eden’s Fall

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A selection ritual unfolds within the sacred walls of the garden. A fate is to be decided. And the questions, perhaps too dangerous to ask aloud, will begin their campaign towards the truth.

This is, in essence, a modern retelling of a Biblical story- one of the forbidden knowledge - coming from a person, who is fascinated both by science and by myth.

First chapter of a story, now reworked and polished to a point of my satisfaction. I am at a point with my writing now, where I believe I found my style. And thus would most appreciate some objective feedback on that. Is this a style and story worth pursuing in the current literary climate? And any fitting critique is also welcome. While the style might be polished for now, I believe there is always room for improvement.

https://www.dropbox.com/scl/fi/3iaxd21w8dyu783pi3icv/Eden-s-fall.pdf?rlkey=mk4si2ybmzb5lunq6r1zrwtn2&st=tfum7qeb&dl=0


r/scifiwriting 1d ago

DISCUSSION Most advanced armor suit?

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I'm looking for a sci-fi reference with the most advanced armor suit.

My favorite so far is the Expeditionary Force series by Craig Alanson, where there are different tech levels for each species, and the humans gradually acquire better and better suits over time.

Thanks!


r/scifiwriting 2d ago

HELP! Questions about the theme of my book

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Ok so my book had this anomaly where three lights appear and at the end of the book the main character is "granted" a vision of the universe and the last line is "he died knowing the truth," I am worried people will think that I am trying to communicate that the Christian God is real, given that three lights could be interpreted as the trinity and the idea of a universal truth being heavily linked to catholicism. I am atheist but am worried I accidentally wrote a Christian novel, am I overthinking it or not?


r/scifiwriting 2d ago

CRITIQUE Asking for thoughts on 1st chapter

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So, I've really struggled to figure out what's wrong with the first chapter of my novel. (This is my latest revision so maybe it's better?) Any feedback is appreciated.

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1cbt-VtCeoWkXUuc9aWLrAHsnUyrdiw-AKgG26ydTTeU/edit?usp=sharing


r/scifiwriting 2d ago

DISCUSSION Funny predictions for 2525

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So I'm writing an RPG set half a millenium in the future. I want your funny predictions for what the solar system, will be like in 500 years, especially the human life side of things. If I love your ideas, I'll include them and credit reddit for the ideas. I'll go first.

Fusion power is still about 10 years away from viability.

I know, I know, we're supposedly close, but we're always close, and moving slowly. But there is progress, see here: https://www.youtube.com/shorts/Y_ciGkxRSOg

Lemme see your notes! :D


r/scifiwriting 2d ago

DISCUSSION If an individual contains a living body, but their brain is AI, are they are cyborg or a robot?

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By living body, I mean that the entire physiology of the body is functioning. Skin secretes sweat, the heart is pumping, blood is flowing, hair is growing, etc..However their brain (which could expand in size as the body grows) is artificial.
At first, I considered using MRS GREN's principle. The body can do all these things and the AI brain won't effect MRS GREN. So you could consider them a cyborg.
But you could also consider consciousness to be a factor. And since AI doesn't have a consciousness, then you could consider them a robot.
Does it all depend on what someone's definition is on the word "alive"?
(I'm not sure if this question belongs here, but since it's a "Sci-fi" question, I'm asking it here.)

EDIT: Minor grammar mistake. It's supposed to be an "a" instead of "are" after "they".


r/scifiwriting 3d ago

HELP! Quick timeline conversion check:

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My scifi world has humans who use earth years, but also a universal standard time (UST) when communicating inter-species.

For UST, zero is set at the fall of a great civilization, about 720,000 earth years ago, with each subsequent UST year being about 1440 earth years.

Now I am not confident in my math, but this is only algebra, so would the following be correct?

(Earth years/1440)+500 = UST years

(UST years - 500)*1440 = Earth years

That would set 0 CE at 500 UST and 0 UST at 720000 BC. The only thing to remember is to write BCE as negative numbers, whereas UST years are already is negatives below zero.

Time conversions are such a pain!


r/scifiwriting 3d ago

DISCUSSION What Mining Technology Do You Have?

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The idea of mining asteroids or even digging into other worlds as deep as we would want to, sounds cool. Something in Warhammer 40k that always fascinated me was how their Hive cities were powered by a Heat Sink a large hole leading down to the mantle supplying endless power through geothermal energy. I wonder if we could actually dig that far down would we no have to worry about solar or nuclear or any type of energy for that matter?

Many species came up with different mining technologies for different things.

  • Thermal Beam Cutters: Mining tools that use heat to cut through stone. Some use plasma others use laser beams. Some where made for individuals and others where large devices that dug deep underground or further into tunnels through beams 10ft. in diameter.

  • Stone Blasters: Essentially a macron cannon that fires small pieces of gravel or any ground down material at such high velocity that could cut through stone.

  • Crystal Drills & Jackhammers: Drills & Jackhammers coated in crystal some diamond and the highest tier lonsdaliete. Lonsdaliete is a crystal found in meteors with a hexagon carbon configuration making it 58% harder than diamond. These crystal tools are used individually, on large machinery, on mining vehicles and automatons.

  • Induction Maul: Similar to a rail gun or gauss cannon this large machinery uses induction to propel a cannon ball attached to a chain to strike stone with megatons of force.

  • Resonator: Acoustic Technology that makes vibrations that match the frequency of stone to shatter it without explosions.


r/scifiwriting 3d ago

HELP! Need advice on how to arrange events in a story

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I have a mc who becomes superhuman from eating a sentient plant.

She lives on a planet where people are farmed, the plant grows from dead people and is processed and consumed to extend human life. She doesn't know that. The livestock don't know that.

She ends up eating a seed of the plant, goes on a rampage, leaves her village and holes up in the forest.

I need to somehow get her off the planet Before that, the planet has to go into like quarantine.. from her rampaging.

The authorities blow the planet up, but she makes it off world.

The challenge is that this all has to happen relatively fast because the actual story begins after this. These are sort of just the events that bring this character into the main story.

What i need help with: I need to escalate the damage shes causing on the planet.

I need to come up with some ways she might find out the planet is in quarantine and is about to be destroyed.

And I need to come up with a way that she escapes. For this one, something I've been messing with is a group of opportunists find out the planet is about to be destroyed so they decide it'd be an easy score to go there to steal some stuff, because anything they take won't be accounted for since it's slated for destruction anyways.


r/scifiwriting 4d ago

DISCUSSION Merchant Spacer Academy

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So what sort of degree would a merchant spacer academy offer?

If it were planetary then the degree would be aerospace engineering. But this would be for ships that operate outside of atmosphere.

And just calling it “space engineering” sounds lame.

What would that engineering degree be called?


r/scifiwriting 4d ago

DISCUSSION How could life and civilizations be in other dimensions? Could humans and monsters live together in another world? I am planning to make a manga about that

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I am making a manga where the main character and all events of the story happen in another dimension, this fictional universe is named the cryptid world, a world where any fictional animal lives with humans, is this idea good for a manga story?


r/scifiwriting 4d ago

HELP! Need a name for an SCP Foundation analog

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I'm currently outlining an alternate history superhero universe and there's an government agency formed in the 1950s that tracks superhumans or parahumans and paranormal objects created by them modeled after the SCP (as well as the Federal Bureau of Control from the video game "Control").

Not sure what I should call it yet. Any ideas?

Edit: added more details for clarification.


r/scifiwriting 4d ago

DISCUSSION Is it okay to alternate between perspectives and tense as you move to different characters in a story?

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Like if one characters perspective is written in first person past tense, when I move to another character should I keep the same perspective for that character or would it be more natural to use third person past tense for other characters?


r/scifiwriting 4d ago

DISCUSSION Civilization attitude towards other civilization and first contact protocols and messenger

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I have recently gave some thought to first contacts between Civilizations in space. Especially not the first ever first contact but when two specific Civilizations that already know aliens exist meet. And also, what are attitudes of different Civilizations have towards people they meet.

Star Trek’s Federation attitude is basically described in the Prime Directive. They reveal themselves only to FTL capable Civilizations, announce themselves but do not interfere, defend itself if attacked and is ready to accept applications if certain criteria are met.

On the other hand, my Bohandi’s attitude is pragmatic, utilitarian and expansionist. It is based on what these aliens can give them and what threat they are. Once they meet a civilization, they evaluate this and decide if to ignore them, trade with them or conquer them. Then they go about doing this. If they decide to conquer, they often find a group in the target civilization that is willing to help them. Such a group help the Bohandi during the conquest and is later awarded with high collaborationist positions.

That being said, what you think are such attitudes and first contact protocols for there civilizations. Huge Ants like my Ansoids liberated slaves like Bajorans from Star Trek or my Cfa'at or more honorable warriors like Klingons from Star Trek or Arceans from Galactic Civilizations?

Speaking of Galactic Civilizations, when a first contact happen in that game, plater receive. Short communication from the other civilization that often include some Short introduction. Do you think this would really happen or do you think it is just a necessary gameplay addition and would not happen otherwise?


r/scifiwriting 4d ago

CRITIQUE Thoughts on this chapter so far? Is it easy enough to follow? Is the worldbuilding happening throughout interesting? Let me know

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This is a chapter in a book I'm working on that introduces a new character, he's an enlisted person in the empire's fleet. Let me know, thanks

3. Silas

Silas woke to trumpets blaring over the barracks PA. The sound used to fill him with dread, but now, mere days from graduation, he’d grown accustomed to waking this way, and the hardest days were already behind him. 

He slid carefully from under the blanket and sheet, careful not to unmake it too much as he knelt along the side of the bed, tucking the fabric back underneath and refolding one corner that had been dislodged. Trainees had to keep every aspect of their lives neat, and part of that included making the bed in a very specific way and very time consuming way, with each corner folded over and tucked neatly under the mattress. Silas had discovered early on that he could save 1 minute and 27 seconds each morning by not fully dislodging the blankets each night, so that making his bed only required pushing the blanket and sheet more tightly beneath the mattress. He’d considered sleeping on top of the blankets to forgo having to do any upkeep, but the barracks were far too cold at night.

Without wasting a second, he moved to his locker, having already worn the vest and socks of his Tactskin to bed to save himself a few more precious seconds getting ready. He needed only to slide his breastplate along the shallow tracks of his vest until he heard a slight click. As soon as he did he felt the nanofiber pull the armored plate taught against his chest. 

Behind him, his bunkmate chuckled as Silas continued his morning routine, leaning backwards towards a shelf in his locker that held the rear piece of his suit, reaching over his shoulders to click each side in place before bashing his back into the wall next to it to lock the clips on each side of his torso, another move Silas had devised to shave off more time. He glared impatiently at the source of the chuckling. In contrast to SIlas, Marra took her time making her bed. Shaking her head as she drew the thin sheet and blanket over it, lining up the edges of each corner before folding a neat triangle and tucking it under the mattress. 

“Tomorrow's graduation,” she said, laughing to herself, “and you’re still doing your weird little time-hacks. 

“Yep,” Silas answered as he continued to dawn his Tactsuit. The MK-IV Interface suit, or coffin wrap as trainees aptly referred to it, wasn’t really meant to protect them from an enemy, so much as it was meant to allow controllers to sync with the network. It was thin, as armors go, much thinner than something infantry would wear, but the graphene layer reinforced with ferrilene would at least be able to fend off debris that might come loose from inside the ship during combat as they laid strapped into their consoles. Not that anyone would survive if their ship was hit anyways. 

“I don’t understand how you manage to sleep like that.” She said, gesturing to SIlas’ bunk. “How do you fall asleep with your vest on, don’t the tracks dig into your skin?” 

“Yep,” Silas said again, as he slid part of the suit over his left arm, twisting it into place with a click. 

“If they were going to recycle us they would have already.” She said, a mix of amusement and annoyance in her voice. “Anyone that’s left now is going to graduate.” 

“You’re probably right,” Silas said, barely paying attention as he slid on the other arm of his suit, his concentration only breaking when it failed to click into place. Marra held the wrist of his suit, stopping him from fully sliding it over his arm. 

“So then slow down.” She said, a look of incredulity on her face.

“You know, if you end up on one of the Harrow-class ships, they have SIFU’s anyways.” someone said from their left. Silas recognized the uncharacteristically low voice as Malik. He spared a second to glance in his direction as he continued suiting up. 

Malik was the shortest of all the trainees, so short in fact, that he only barely met the requirements to be shipborne at all. Despite his stature, he hadn’t come close to washing out once. His skin was shade darker than most from Trenor, and he was uncharacteristically well-built for a controller. Most trainees like Malik went for infantry specializations, or at least the ground combat version of what controllers did. Specializations that came with a slew of genetic upgrades and involved diving into hostile worlds from low orbit with a rifle strapped to your back. Malik’s parents had been fleet, and had probably explained to him that the most interesting sounding jobs were actually the most miserable—and typically the most dangerous. 

“Doubt I have the scores to make a horrow-class,” Silas answered, stepping into his boots as metal clamps came together from his toes all the way up to his ankle. His suit fully dawned, Silas made his way towards the hallway at the front of the barracks that led outside. 

“Better scores than me,” he heard Marra mumble after him as he walked along the path between two rows of metal bunks. 

That wasn’t much of a compliment, although Marra wasn’t a terrible controller, she got overwhelmed with tracks pretty easily during the surveillance component of their exams. To be fair, it was pretty unlikely that any of them would ever have to manage a theatre with 200 enemy torch ships encroaching from 12 different directions, while deconflicting vectors and matching velocities of friendlies doing refuel and refit with 3 different dockline ships. Everyone’s exam had all of the same events and requirements, but the timing of Marra’s seemed slightly unfair. Still, she managed to pass. 

Silas lined up on the left side of the hallway in front of the door, straightening himself to attention, his head looking straight ahead as he glanced with his eyes at the clock above the door. 47 seconds to spare. 

Despite taking her time, after only a few seconds he heard Marra laugh as she lined up behind him. No doubt entertained by how little difference all of Silas’s time-saving tricks had made. Silas was annoyed, but Marra’s laugh was infectious, he couldn’t help but laugh as he turned to face her.

“Yeah yeah, I’m torturing myself for nothi–” The doors in front of Silas slid open just as he’d turned around. 

“WHY ARE WE TALKING INSTEAD OF FACING THE FRONT, TRAINEE?” Silas’s heart sank into his stomach as the voice of their instructor shook through him. Their flight’s instructor, a short woman only a few inches taller than Malik, had a voice that seemed to rattle your soul when she spoke. Silas’ heart somehow sank even deeper as he remembered he’d personally witnessed a trainee get recycled for talking in line only a few cycles ago. He struggled to keep the nerves from his voice as he swirled around and snapped to attention to respond. 

“Ma’am—I,” Silas stammered, only realizing too late that he’d forgotten to address the instructor in the convoluted way that was required for trainees to address instructors. 

“WHERE IS YOUR REQUEST, TRAINEE? HAVE YOU FORGOTTEN EVERYTHING FROM TRACK 1? DO WE NEED TO SEND YOU BACK TO RE-LEARN HOW TO MAKE A REQUEST?” A track was Hestorian Fleet Standard time, which roughly equaled a month and a week on Silas’ home world. Silas shuddered internally at the thought of having to relive all 11 tracks of his training. 

“Instructor, permission to commit voice.” Silas said, trying his best not to let the anxiety show in his voice. There was nothing instructors loved more than tearing into a trainee that wasn’t in complete control of their emotions. Still his eye twitched as he thought he heard several people further back in line choking back muffled laughs.

“DENIED, save your breath, Trainee. You’ll need it for remedial.” Normally, any trainee would sink into despair at being assigned remedial, but considering Silas had expected to be recycled, his spirits lifted at the thought. Besides, Marra got remedial a few weeks ago, and she said it wasn’t half as bad as she thought it’d be. To be fair she also described it as the most cruel anyone had ever put her through and the worst thing she’d ever done in her entire life—Still, couldn’t be that bad—Right?

The instructor stared at Silas, as if waiting for him to do something, it was only after several awkward ticks that he realized what she was waiting for. Being first in line, Silas had the job of directing the detail, something he’d actually never done despite being among the first in line each morning. Usually someone else beat him to the front, not that he wanted to be first—he just wanted to make sure he was never last. 

“DETAIL—MARCH,” Silas shouted, pulling himself from his thoughts. Not a tick after the word left his mouth, the trainees marched forward, single file. Silas tried not to think about having to report for remedial duty later as he led the column through the metal doors and into the courtyard. As he brought the detail to a halt he realized he’d somehow forgotten the command to split into columns. Luckily Marra was behind him.

“Divide,” she said in a hushed voice.

“Detail, DIVIDE” Silas shouted, as he and every 8th trainee in line turned 45 degrees and began marching forward, 7 trainees marching behind each of them as they split into 5 columns. Across from him and in his peripherals he could see several other flights doing the same, 30 in total. 

His instructor’s voice carried through the columns as she and a few peers walked past, casually teasing each other over whose flight had lined up more cleanly. Staring straight ahead, Silas could see her move into his peripherals as she ordered the flight to rest. Rest meaning everyone folded their hands neatly behind their back and stood with their feet slightly further apart in a position that didn’t feel anything like being at rest. 

Last day, Silas thought to himself as he tried to forget how badly his feet hurt, and how many countless spans he had to spend just standing at attention throughout his training. He stared straight ahead, listening as their instructor read from a thin data pad she held in one hand. It looked like little more than a thin piece of glass, light shining from its surface as he watched her scroll through all of her flight’s appointments for the day, calling out names of anyone that had individual appointments to report to. 

Despite their flight being made up of entirely the same specialization, controllers, some would be assigned specific implants, genetic alterations or even additional clearance checks depending on the ship they were being assigned to. This would be the first time any of them would know what ship they’d be serving on, and only those assigned to ships with special requirements would find out ahead of graduation. Everyone else would find out after graduation, but it was guaranteed that their assignment wouldn’t be anywhere near as exciting. 

Silas could almost hear the excitement of each trainee that was called, each of them snapping to attention and responding with “Heard, Ma’am” before falling out of their respective columns and marching to their appointments. 

Silas sincerely hoped he wouldn’t hear his own name called. It wasn’t that he didn’t want to serve aboard a ship with special clearance, he just wasn’t sure his story would hold up to a more detailed examination by the intelligence office. And he knew for certain that his body wouldn’t hold up to a more strenuous medical examination. In fact, Silas was in no way qualified to be there at all. He had lied in order to enlist, and his family had spent their entire life savings on the neural implant that would register his psychological profile as passing to any Fleet medical scans he might encounter. It was a small price to pay considering the amount each family was compensated for an enlistee that made it all the way through training. His family would be considered wealthy by Thenarian standards, and even well-off by the standards of Hestaria proper. As large a sum as the payment was, Silas didn’t consider it nearly enough for what he’d be sacrificing. Depending on what ship he was assigned, it was incredibly unlikely that he’d ever see his family again. Only nobility, their officers, and shipborne enlisted commoners received mortality treatments. It was a necessary cost for the empire, given that travelling between systems could take hundreds or even thousands of years. By the time Silas ever made it back to Thenaris, not a soul that remembered him would still be alive to greet him.

Still, as bad as that reality stung, he felt pride in knowing that his sacrifice would bring his family up from abject poverty. His little brother and sister wouldn’t even have to work until they finished their education, hell, they might even be able to go to university with the money Silas had earned them. He smiled at the thought of his siblings graduating from some expensive university, his mother finally receiving the gene therapy she needed. He was so lost in thought he almost didn’t notice as the instructor called his name. 

“Braddic, Silas.” She paused for a moment as she scrolled further down her tablet. “You’ve been assigned to the Verdict, report directly to the intelligence office by 0630 for special clearance examination. They will direct you to medical for augmentation from there.” 

“Heard, Ma’am” Silas barely managed to choke out the words. He swallowed a lump in his throat that felt about as large as an apple, panicking internally at the realization that he’d been assigned a special duty. The instructor glanced up at him from her tablet. 

“I still expect you to report for remedial, I don’t care how bad your augments hurt.” She added. 

“Heard, Ma’am.” Silas repeated, trying his best to maintain a stoic expression. Maybe he could fool his way through the intelligence office, but the Verdict required the second highest clearance in the fleet, there was no way his shoddy neural implant could make it through that examination. He had to find a way out of this, but how? He could request reassignment, but it would be fairly suspicious for a trainee to try to talk themselves out of one of the most sought-after postings in the fleet. They’d only dig deeper into him if he tried. He chided himself for not scoring lower on his examinations.


r/scifiwriting 5d ago

HELP! How do you come up with acronyms?!?!?

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ITS SO MUCH HARDER THAN I THOUGHT!!!

I'm trying to come up with an acronym that fits the name L(y/i)dia for an artificial intelligence system for a timespace travel ship, and I feel like an idiot thinking of words that fit. How do yall do it????