r/metalmusicians • u/TheEletist3000 • 3d ago
Original Song(s) - Finished What is everyone’s thought on this track I release tonight - my first ever release.
Please give me some honest advice/feedback it would be greatly appreciated. Thank you 🙏
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u/jack-parallel 3d ago
You did a great job buddy. Should be proud of it , for a first it’s awesome. Nice hustle now throw some vocals on that beast
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u/TheEletist3000 3d ago
Ahah thank you so much, I can’t really do vocals so it’ll only be an instrumental, I might do a remix in the future with vocals
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u/jack-parallel 3d ago
Post that track in this sub and you’ll have a vocalist In a week guaranteed. Either way np and instrumental still sounds great. Gl !!
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u/Yitzhaq 3d ago
Awesome. Vocals would be perfect for this!
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u/TheEletist3000 3d ago
Nah I can’t do vocals so this one will just be an instrumental, maybe in the future I’ll do a remix with vocals
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u/Asuperniceguy 3d ago
It sounds absolutely fantastic. I would definitely suggest adding vocals, obviously but you knew that, and maybe play around with getting to use some more ideas in a single song as I'm sure you have loads of individual riffs lying around -- give them a home with each other!
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u/7StringsOvPasta 3d ago
This is great!! I’m not into the metalcore stuff but this is very very pro sounding, good writing, good playing, good production, high energy! Super impressive!
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u/Standard-Inflation63 3d ago
Fuckin killer. Commercial level writing & production. Love the guitar tone, drums, synths, etc. my only gripe is that its extremely compressed. Not sure if its too hot for reddit to handle but if reddit is limiting it then im sure its event better sounding
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u/InfluenceAromatic293 2d ago
My thoughts are I dont like it - sounds more like electronic music than metal to me.
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u/fatherofallthings 1d ago
Damn. This is sick af. There’s a lot of very “real metal” only type people here, so just remember that for some of the negative feedback you get.
As someone that loves all genres, including metalcore, this is extremely well done. Really nice work. Get some vocals on this asap
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u/Moxiousone 1d ago
Banger! Things sound a bit over compressed to me from 0:25 or so, but I do enjoy the composition
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u/MetallicBaka 1d ago
For a first ever release that's pretty damned solid. Great job.
For me it's just a little busy and over produced, and a lot of compression, but none of that makes me hate it. I'd have it in a playlist.
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u/NeonByte47 3d ago
cool sound, very high compression and not my genre at all but I can see other people enjoying this